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No entiendo! Quieres decir, que yo siendo nativa no sé Inglés?

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I’m so glad you found this live useful! Do check out my how to write a poetry essay as well! I use examples and show you how how write a response 👍 K

Okay surely I will thanks again😊​@@EnglishwithKayleigh

Great analysis 👍 have you completed the exam or taking it in the future? 🌺 K

Hello ~ I’m glad you were happy with the poem that came up! I wouldn’t worry too much about using the correct name …it’s the overall quality of the essay and Cambridge mark positively (they do not deduct points for inaccuracy). It shouldn’t impact by more than a mark or so. 🌺 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh ok thank you miss, that’s a relief, I’m really hoping for a 9 on literature as I pride it with being my best subject! Your videos made my choice of picking it for A level a lot easier. 🙏🏽

De nada! Welcome to my channel!🤗

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Which one did you write on? I hope it went well 🌺

@@EnglishwithKayleigh I analyzed Football at Slack. I had watched your video the day before, about the essay structure and model paragraphs, answering a question to this poem, and your analysis video also about this poem. They helped a lot!

Amazing news - congratulations! 🥂🌺

Our time zone had Wind and someone else had Football at Slack…it came down to place 🤣 hope your exam went well and that you found the videos helpful 🌺 K

We had Wind and Roe Deer! Hope the exam went well for you 🌺

@@EnglishwithKayleigh Yes, Thank you. Your videos really helped me!

Thank you!🌷🤗

Thanks for commenting ~ very kind words! Wishing you the best for the exam 🌺 K

You’re going to be great! Just try your best 🌺 K

No set structure. My only suggestion would be to organise your points chronologically (e.g. how is the moon presented in Harvest Moon? Think how is it presented at the start, in the middle, at the end - this will allow you to focus evenly on all parts of the poem!) Best of luck 🌺 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh so do not make points based on techniques but more on the effects?

@Rancher2201 That’s how I suggest candidates do it - you can then use techniques as part of your analysis to support your point 👍 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh ok thank you👍🙏

Hi ~ it depends on the question. You may get a variation of the following: how is the jaguar presented? / how are the animals presented? Or another style is: how does Hughes make this such a striking / powerful poem? If you’d like to pick one, and write out your point sentences, I can provide feedback 👍 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh so if the question was: how is the jaguar presented? would the points --> the jaguar is presented as a symbol of liberation in both the physical and mental capacity, the jaguar is presented as a juxtaposition to other animals, the Jaguar is presented as a symbol of idealist revolutionary be ok?

I think it’s to do with hughes stating that Assia Wevill uses these sorts of excuses to justify her actions. Such as later on talking about nature, gods etc. I believe the Aristotle point is about nature needing to fill a vacuum with matter, so Hughes is saying that Wevill’s entitlement is so Severe it’s related to godly powers of nature and the gods. At least that’s how i see it. 🙏🏽

Yes, it is 🌺 K

You’re welcome 🌺 K

Hello! Thanks for commenting. I think your points are great. However, you may want to explore the personification of the mouse in one of the body paragraphs as this is a technique that is used. You would still have three strong body paragraphs and you are lesson likely to repeat analysis. Hope this helps 🌺 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh thank you so much ☺️

Haha I’m so glad you’ve found this useful! Are you sitting the exam tomorrow?! 🌺

@@EnglishwithKayleigh Unfortunately yes. I am going through all your Hughes videos. SERIOUSLY don’t know what I’d do without them. I shared your channel with my friend. You’re out here saving lives🙏🙏

@withlovenyx9559 I’m sure you’re both going to do great! Wishing you the very best of luck 🌺 K

I’m so glad it’s helpful! Wishing you all the best for the exam ~ K 🌺

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Hi ~ if you mean PPTs that analyse the poems in details, then yes I have them all. I will link each of them to this thread - Wind www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12791137 🌺

Football at Slack www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12791133

Cat and Mouse www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12791129

Hi! Thanks for your comment ~ it would greatly depend on the question. If the question was ‘how is nature presented?’ you could explore how it is powerful, merciless, and used as a metaphor for stormy human relationships. I hope this helps! K 🌺

That’s great - a really thoughtful interpretation and link to Hughes’ life as a man of nature 👍

Hi - it is most likely Assia Wevill (I do give context in the poem that links to her suicide note that supports this idea). Some people suggest the you might be Hughes himself though 👍 Hope it helps! K

Hi - it is most likely Assia Wevill (I do give context in the poem that links to her suicide note that supports this idea). Some people suggest the you might be Hughes himself though 👍 Hope it helps! K

You could definitely explore the ambiguity of the meaning and explore both the positive and negative connotation 👍 K

Hello! Thank you for your comment ~ this is part of the extended metaphor that translates to the sea is ruthless/‘cold’. “The deeps are cold: In that darkness camaraderie does not hold: Nothing touches but, clutching, devours.” It is personified by given it human qualities - the ability to decide if it wishes to forgive/allow for life or destroy. I hope this helps 🌺 K

Thank you!🤗

Thanks for your comment ~ I’m glad the video helped you. I’m hoping to create a similar video to support the drama question. Like and subscribe to see when it goes live! Best of luck with upcoming exams 🌺 K

@@EnglishwithKayleigh Thankyou! It would be great if you could create that before 15th of this month i have my drama exam. Just before that.

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